Western European Country, Paris is the capital and is the largest city in the country. It has a population of 6405 million inhabitants (THIS IS NOT POSSIBLE! YOU MADE A MISTAKE), It is a crowded country OR CITY?, bordered on the south by the sea Mediterranean, the Enclave of Monaco and Italy, in the southwest with Spain and Andorra, west to the Bay of Viscaya, North to the Slick Channel, north sea and Belgium and to the east Luxemburgo, Germany and Switzerland. There are several national parks and regional reserves surrounded by the sea, lakes and rivers, scattered across different parts of the country. The railway network of France, is the most extensive in Western Europe. high speed trains which travels for commercial use. The Eurostar and the Eurotunnel Shuttle, connects with the United Kingdom through the Channel Tunnel.
GOOD DESCRIPTION OF COUNTRY! CORRECT THE MISTAKES!
I liked it but I think it's short and you could have written about another interesting topics. I know it's difficult to prepare a summary of an European country in three paragraphs but people like articles that are important and interesting. Congratulations. Without that mistake(6405 million inhabitants!), your composition is very good.
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Western European Country, Paris is the capital and is the largest city in the country. It has a population of 6405 million inhabitants (THIS IS NOT POSSIBLE! YOU MADE A MISTAKE), It is a crowded country OR CITY?, bordered on the south by the sea Mediterranean, the Enclave of Monaco and Italy, in the southwest with Spain and Andorra, west to the Bay of Viscaya, North to the Slick Channel, north sea and Belgium and to the east Luxemburgo, Germany and Switzerland. There are several national parks and regional reserves surrounded by the sea, lakes and rivers, scattered across different parts of the country.
The railway network of France, is the most extensive in Western Europe. high speed trains which travels for commercial use.
The Eurostar and the Eurotunnel Shuttle, connects with the United Kingdom through the Channel Tunnel.
GOOD DESCRIPTION OF COUNTRY! CORRECT THE MISTAKES!
I liked it but I think it's short and you could have written about another interesting topics. I know it's difficult to prepare a summary of an European country in three paragraphs but people like articles that are important and interesting.
Congratulations. Without that mistake(6405 million inhabitants!), your composition is very good.
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